drunk?at noon
in my next life make me
a honeybee


8 Responses

  1. Mark Dailey Says:

    Wonderful! Especially now that it's spring…

    spring afternoon
    how many birds
    in a bottle of wine

  2. Mojde Says:

    an intersection for thinking..

    CNS loses its command
    drunkenness …

  3. Dawn Apanius Says:


  4. Debbie Feller Says:

    watching birds eat
    whiskey soaked bread
    before Alzheimer's

  5. Pravat Says:

    Interesting ku with depth and mystery (yugen).

    honey drops
    from the rooftop
    the bitterness
    I feel gathering the
    trembling wings of the bees

    Pravat Kumar Padhy

    ***** ***** *****

  6. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    I imagined a garden party and a bee has been attracted by the narrator's wine glass. But perhaps it's only wasps that do this? In any case, I saw this is a celebratory haiku!


  7. 52Blue Says:

    super lovely

  8. freethinker Says:

    It's such an exciting image with so much depth and mystery to it.
    Or maybe it's a hint that you should lay down booze. Just sayin'…

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