in the space between falling rain and loneliness . . . the song that once was ours
—Paresh Tiwari
Issue 18.1 | 16 May 2018
A beautiful tanka with poetic essence (honi). The visual description (miru tei) unfolds the layers of loneliness (yugen tei).
sublime smiles the painting portrays I adjust to live rewinding the coil of time in the shadows of my loneliness
Pravat Kumar Padhy Publication Credit: Notes From the Gean, Vol 2, Issue 2, 2010
**** **** **** a solitary kite in the twilight sky dusk deepens unfolding the heaviness of her long loneliness
Pravat Kumar Padhy Publication Credits: A Hundred Gourds, 4:2, March 2015 One Man’s Maple Moon, 2017
***** ***** *****
Devastating. Thank you.
Beautiful tanka and so poignant.
Lovely sadness evoked—beautiful
Beautiful work, Paresh. A tanka I wish I had written.
Oh, how sad but so beautiful, Paresh!
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May 16th, 2018 at 9:06 am
A beautiful tanka with poetic essence (honi). The visual description (miru tei) unfolds the layers of loneliness (yugen tei).
sublime smiles
the painting portrays
I adjust to live
rewinding the coil of time
in the shadows of my loneliness
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Publication Credit: Notes From the Gean, Vol 2, Issue 2, 2010
**** **** ****
a solitary kite
in the twilight sky
dusk deepens
unfolding the heaviness
of her long loneliness
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Publication Credits: A Hundred Gourds, 4:2, March 2015
One Man’s Maple Moon, 2017
***** ***** *****
May 16th, 2018 at 9:17 am
Devastating. Thank you.
May 16th, 2018 at 10:34 am
Beautiful tanka and so poignant.
May 16th, 2018 at 11:48 am
Lovely sadness evoked—beautiful
May 16th, 2018 at 2:30 pm
Beautiful work, Paresh. A tanka I wish I had written.
May 16th, 2018 at 3:31 pm
Oh, how sad but so beautiful, Paresh!