morning light
painting over
my painting
(Originally appeared in Modern Haiku 49.1)
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Debbi Antebi
Debbi Antebi (@debbisland) lives with her husband and daughter in London, England, where she works as a college counselor. Her work has appeared in tinywords, Frogpond, Modern Haiku, The Heron's Nest, Drifting Sands, Blithe Spirit, hedgerow, Prune Juice, and elsewhere. She exhales oxygen while reading and writing poems.
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kinda meta
Lovely layers to this little poem. Is the artist painting over something revealed by the morning light, or is the light itself doing the over-painting. As an artist, I love where this takes me.
An interesting ku with layered images!
window painting
moon close to her shyness
veiled in curtain
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Publication Credit: Simply Haiku, Summer 2011, Vol. 9, No.3&4
new day surely bring new ideas to bare..its like one going over his haiku by turning text around to make the moment shine brighter.
As an artist, I see this as renewed inspiration brought about by the arrival of a brand new morning. Lovely.
marion