(Originally appeared in Modern Haiku 49.1)
Issue 18.1 | 11 June 2018
Lovely layers to this little poem. Is the artist painting over something revealed by the morning light, or is the light itself doing the over-painting. As an artist, I love where this takes me.
An interesting ku with layered images!
moon close to her shyness
veiled in curtain
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Publication Credit: Simply Haiku, Summer 2011, Vol. 9, No.3&4
new day surely bring new ideas to bare..its like one going over his haiku by turning text around to make the moment shine brighter.
As an artist, I see this as renewed inspiration brought about by the arrival of a brand new morning. Lovely.
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