our back and forth
the icicle lengthens
drop by drop
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Debbi Antebi
Debbi Antebi (@debbisland) lives with her husband and daughter in London, England, where she works as a college counselor. Her work has appeared in tinywords, Frogpond, Modern Haiku, The Heron's Nest, Drifting Sands, Blithe Spirit, hedgerow, Prune Juice, and elsewhere. She exhales oxygen while reading and writing poems.
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great example of showing and not telling
Thank you, Gaby!
Grand, Debbi_! So many icicles in our lives.
__ This, is my humble but complementary echo from… 5 March of 2009, 'twas actually the close of a previous "note-book" haibun.
one drop lingers
at winter's last icicle
a candle flame
Lovely, thanks for sharing your haiku!
Beautifully portrayed.
musical whisper
the icicles soften
the evening
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Publication Credit: Haikuuniverse 8.9.2017
drop by drop–
the stillness of the
flowing sound
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Publication Credit: World Haiku Review, June 2015
nice