our back and forth
the icicle lengthens
drop by drop

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Debbi Antebi

Debbi Antebi (@debbisland) lives with her husband and daughter in London, England, where she works as a college counselor. Her work has appeared in tinywords, Frogpond, Modern Haiku, The Heron's Nest, Drifting Sands, Blithe Spirit, hedgerow, Prune Juice, and elsewhere. She exhales oxygen while reading and writing poems.

6 thoughts on “”

  1. Grand, Debbi_! So many icicles in our lives.
    __ This, is my humble but complementary echo from… 5 March of 2009, 'twas actually the close of a previous "note-book" haibun.

    one drop lingers
    at winter's last icicle
    a candle flame

  2. Beautifully portrayed.

    musical whisper
    the icicles soften
    the evening

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    Publication Credit: Haikuuniverse 8.9.2017

    drop by drop–
    the stillness of the
    flowing sound

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    Publication Credit: World Haiku Review, June 2015

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