our back and forth the icicle lengthens drop by drop
—Debbi Antebi
Issue 18.1 | 10 July 2018
great example of showing and not telling
Thank you, Gaby!
Grand, Debbi_! So many icicles in our lives. __ This, is my humble but complementary echo from… 5 March of 2009, 'twas actually the close of a previous "note-book" haibun.
one drop lingers at winter's last icicle a candle flame
Lovely, thanks for sharing your haiku!
Beautifully portrayed.
musical whisper the icicles soften the evening
Pravat Kumar Padhy Publication Credit: Haikuuniverse 8.9.2017
drop by drop– the stillness of the flowing sound
Pravat Kumar Padhy Publication Credit: World Haiku Review, June 2015
nice
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July 10th, 2018 at 8:54 am
great example of showing and not telling
July 10th, 2018 at 12:24 pm
Thank you, Gaby!
July 10th, 2018 at 9:23 am
Grand, Debbi_! So many icicles in our lives.
__ This, is my humble but complementary echo from… 5 March of 2009, 'twas actually the close of a previous "note-book" haibun.
one drop lingers
at winter's last icicle
a candle flame
July 10th, 2018 at 12:29 pm
Lovely, thanks for sharing your haiku!
July 10th, 2018 at 8:27 pm
Beautifully portrayed.
musical whisper
the icicles soften
the evening
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Publication Credit: Haikuuniverse 8.9.2017
drop by drop–
the stillness of the
flowing sound
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Publication Credit: World Haiku Review, June 2015
March 25th, 2019 at 8:46 am
nice