by the tiller the sound of a dolphin taking a breath
—David Oates
Issue 18.1 | 19 July 2018
Well envisioned, David! __ A breath, then that quick plunge to the deep; the last seen, was that flagging tail. _m
inhale gasp then warm tide dive to its depths dolphin's tail
David, sometimes without really knowing why a haiku will strike a chord, and your’s did with me. It has a resonance that brought tears to me. Well done and thank you!
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July 19th, 2018 at 4:00 pm
Well envisioned, David!
__ A breath, then that quick plunge to the deep; the last seen, was that flagging tail. _m
inhale gasp
then warm tide dive to its depths
dolphin's tail
July 20th, 2018 at 2:56 pm
David, sometimes without really knowing why a haiku will strike a chord, and your’s did with me. It has a resonance that brought tears to me. Well done and thank you!
July 23rd, 2018 at 4:33 pm
Thank you!