by the tiller
the sound of a dolphin
taking a breath

3 Responses

  1. Magyar Says:

    Well envisioned, David!
    __ A breath, then that quick plunge to the deep; the last seen, was that flagging tail. _m

    inhale gasp
    then warm tide dive to its depths
    dolphin's tail

  2. Andy Says:

    David, sometimes without really knowing why a haiku will strike a chord, and your’s did with me. It has a resonance that brought tears to me. Well done and thank you!

  3. David Oates Says:

    Thank you!

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