by the tiller
the sound of a dolphin
taking a breath
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David Oates
David Oates wrote the books Night of the Potato, Drunken Robins, and Shifting with My Sandwich Hand (the last two of haiku) and is the host of "Wordland" on public radio in Athens, Georgia.
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Well envisioned, David!
__ A breath, then that quick plunge to the deep; the last seen, was that flagging tail. _m
inhale gasp
then warm tide dive to its depths
dolphin's tail
David, sometimes without really knowing why a haiku will strike a chord, and your’s did with me. It has a resonance that brought tears to me. Well done and thank you!
Well envisioned, David!
__ A breath, then that quick plunge to the deep; the last seen, was that flagging tail. _m
inhale gasp
then warm tide dive to its depths
dolphin's tail
David, sometimes without really knowing why a haiku will strike a chord, and your’s did with me. It has a resonance that brought tears to me. Well done and thank you!
Thank you!