early autumn
the deepening taste
of the well water

5 Responses

  1. Norman Darlington Says:

    Beautifully felt and expressed.

  2. Joy MacVane Says:

    Thank you. So kind of you to say.

  3. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    I like it as it is, but I also long for a more concrete word than “deepening” -; say ‘earthy’ or even ‘bitter’.

  4. Mel Gambutti Says:

    taste of
    fall water-
    the tannin of leaves

  5. texaspoetspodcast Says:

    Well done.

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