day break —
my dog wakes up
shaking off yesterday

6 Responses

  1. Pravat Kumar Padhy Says:

    A brilliant ku.The use of the word phrase, "shaking off yesterday" is a depiction of poignancy in image manifestation. Congratulations, Rashmi.

    early dawn–
    millions of stars
    in dark

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    EarthRise 2015: Years of Light, Haiku Foundation

    *
    dawn break–
    I wash my night image
    for an early arrival

    Pravat Kumar Padhy
    Haiku Foundation Workplace Haiku: Theme Dawn in the Office, 4.10.2017 (Ed. Jim Kacian)

  2. Rashmi Vesa Says:

    Thank you Padhy ji for your gracious comments _/\_

    I particularly like the imagery and depth 'millions of stars in dark ' and 'early arrival'.There is just so much to read in that.
    Thank you for posting the two haiku.

  3. purplepeninportland Says:

    Excellent "tiny" Rashmi!

  4. Rashmi Vesa Says:

    Thank you _/_

  5. kalaramesh Says:

    You are writing well, Rashmi.
    Can you please share your email id?
    warmly,
    _kala

  6. martin1223 Says:

    As usual, I’m late, I’m late, for a very important date; no time, no time …down the dark rabbit hole, way past the event horizon, not late, no date, no time, no time, only in wonderland…

    in the length of a breath shooting star

    Again, I enjoyed your poem just like the one in the future!

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