Thank you Padhy ji for your gracious comments _/\_
I particularly like the imagery and depth 'millions of stars in dark ' and 'early arrival'.There is just so much to read in that.
Thank you for posting the two haiku.
As usual, I’m late, I’m late, for a very important date; no time, no time …down the dark rabbit hole, way past the event horizon, not late, no date, no time, no time, only in wonderland…
in the length of a breath shooting star
Again, I enjoyed your poem just like the one in the future!
December 17th, 2018 at 8:57 am
A brilliant ku.The use of the word phrase, "shaking off yesterday" is a depiction of poignancy in image manifestation. Congratulations, Rashmi.
early dawn–
millions of stars
in dark
Pravat Kumar Padhy
EarthRise 2015: Years of Light, Haiku Foundation
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dawn break–
I wash my night image
for an early arrival
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Haiku Foundation Workplace Haiku: Theme Dawn in the Office, 4.10.2017 (Ed. Jim Kacian)
December 18th, 2018 at 4:00 am
Thank you Padhy ji for your gracious comments _/\_
I particularly like the imagery and depth 'millions of stars in dark ' and 'early arrival'.There is just so much to read in that.
Thank you for posting the two haiku.
December 17th, 2018 at 6:29 pm
Excellent "tiny" Rashmi!
December 18th, 2018 at 4:02 am
Thank you _/_
January 15th, 2019 at 2:36 pm
You are writing well, Rashmi.
Can you please share your email id?
warmly,
_kala
July 7th, 2020 at 12:22 pm
As usual, I’m late, I’m late, for a very important date; no time, no time …down the dark rabbit hole, way past the event horizon, not late, no date, no time, no time, only in wonderland…
in the length of a breath shooting star
Again, I enjoyed your poem just like the one in the future!