Rashmi Vesa is a civil servant living in Bengaluru, India. She writes poetry - haiku, tanka, cherita and other allied genres. A workaholic, for a few moments daily, she retreats to an alternate, stress free life in the world of words. She believes in the universality of humankind and seeks to find its articulation in writing. Her work has been published in many reputed journals.
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A brilliant ku.The use of the word phrase, "shaking off yesterday" is a depiction of poignancy in image manifestation. Congratulations, Rashmi.
early dawn–
millions of stars
in dark
Pravat Kumar Padhy
EarthRise 2015: Years of Light, Haiku Foundation
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dawn break–
I wash my night image
for an early arrival
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Haiku Foundation Workplace Haiku: Theme Dawn in the Office, 4.10.2017 (Ed. Jim Kacian)
Thank you Padhy ji for your gracious comments _/\_
I particularly like the imagery and depth 'millions of stars in dark ' and 'early arrival'.There is just so much to read in that.
Thank you for posting the two haiku.
As usual, I’m late, I’m late, for a very important date; no time, no time …down the dark rabbit hole, way past the event horizon, not late, no date, no time, no time, only in wonderland…
in the length of a breath shooting star
Again, I enjoyed your poem just like the one in the future!
A brilliant ku.The use of the word phrase, "shaking off yesterday" is a depiction of poignancy in image manifestation. Congratulations, Rashmi.
early dawn–
millions of stars
in dark
Pravat Kumar Padhy
EarthRise 2015: Years of Light, Haiku Foundation
*
dawn break–
I wash my night image
for an early arrival
Pravat Kumar Padhy
Haiku Foundation Workplace Haiku: Theme Dawn in the Office, 4.10.2017 (Ed. Jim Kacian)
Thank you Padhy ji for your gracious comments _/\_
I particularly like the imagery and depth 'millions of stars in dark ' and 'early arrival'.There is just so much to read in that.
Thank you for posting the two haiku.
Excellent "tiny" Rashmi!
Thank you _/_
You are writing well, Rashmi.
Can you please share your email id?
warmly,
_kala
As usual, I’m late, I’m late, for a very important date; no time, no time …down the dark rabbit hole, way past the event horizon, not late, no date, no time, no time, only in wonderland…
in the length of a breath shooting star
Again, I enjoyed your poem just like the one in the future!