a grid of white squares
on the calendar
doing life

 


4 Responses

  1. Mike Schoenburg Says:

    my own backyard
    I forget
    to love it 🏡

  2. Magyar Says:

    'Tis nifty, Leslie_!
    __ My moment's thought was generated by your 'calendar', and it had caused this senryu response; those white squares. Thanks_!
    _m

    daily dice
    as we count every dot
    another toss

  3. Alan Summers Says:

    Ah, yes, that new year feel with both a diary, and a year planner! But a blank canvas can be as exciting as it is daunting. Neat poem!

  4. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    'doing life' could be read as planning out one's life, medical/dental check ups etc or it could be a prisoner in a cell staring at a calendar that will remain filled with nothing. Clever!

    marion

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