the line
to his IV drip
morning glories

7 Responses

  1. Mike Schoenburg Says:

    loves me
    loves me not
    shredded daisies ?

  2. Peter Newton Says:

    What a tender way of seeing the tendril of a drip line.

  3. Garry Says:

    Field hospital? ;-)

  4. Marie Louise Munro Says:

    the slow drips
    of our IV lines . . .
    winter lilies

    (Modern Haiku. Autumn 2016;
    The Haiku Calendar 2018)

  5. Marie Louise Munro Says:

    Lovely image of the line as a vine of morning glories. Transformative.

  6. Magyar Says:

    Grand Melissa; that line of life, drip by drip!
    __ This, nature's parallel to your heartful verse, prompted my imagination. Thank you. _m

    ivy vine
    enlivened with each due drop
    natures care

  7. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Oh! So well observed, Melissa.


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