winter’s end
an old man’s cough
in the crow’s caw
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Susan Constable
Susan Constable mainly writes haiku and tanka, receiving her inspiration from life on the west coast of Canada. Her work is widely published in both print and online journals, as well as in numerous anthologies. She has judged several contests as well as co-edited a couple of haiku and tanka anthologies She was the tanka editor for the online journal A Hundred Gourds from March 2012 to June 2016. View all posts by Susan Constable
wonderful poem. an original in a much overdone area. wow.
Susan, a terrific winter ku. I like the "c's" in "cough in the crow's caw". It heightens the sense of coughing…something I've been dealing with this past month!
Read this odd ‘one-liner’
a few years ago:
caw caw caw crow
Thanks, Mike!
Brilliant use of sound, Susan!
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