winter’s end
an old man’s cough
in the crow’s caw

5 Responses

  1. stanford forrester Says:

    wonderful poem. an original in a much overdone area. wow.

  2. Dan Curtis Says:

    Susan, a terrific winter ku. I like the "c's" in "cough in the crow's caw". It heightens the sense of coughing…something I've been dealing with this past month!

  3. Mike Schoenburg Says:

    Read this odd ‘one-liner’
    a few years ago:

    caw caw caw crow

  4. Susan Constable Says:

    Thanks, Mike!

  5. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Brilliant use of sound, Susan!


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