morning news
the rising shriek
of the kettle


8 Responses

  1. Marita Says:

    great haiku!
    Well said, evoked a “sad laugh”

  2. Pbergonzi Says:

    Well done Patricia.

  3. Mike Schoenburg Says:

    afternoon waves
    as the falling sun
    shadows the sand 🌅

  4. Bruce Feingold Says:

    Wonderful, true, sad & funny. Nicely done!!

  5. jean leblanc Says:

    Pat! This is so powerful and beautiful–just like all your poetry.

  6. martin1223 Says:

    This poem with absolute pitch describes the dread that permeates our time.

  7. Sheila Sondik Says:

    Clever and so moving.

  8. Shelly T Says:

    Patricia, strong ku!

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