bento box
my worries

13 Responses

  1. stanford m. forrester Says:

    wonderful! a nice clean and fresh senryu!

  2. Sheila Sondik Says:

    Thank you, Stanford!

  3. Peggy Bilbro Says:

    I was going to say exactly what Stanford did! This is a wonderful senryu! So very compact but perfectly captures the moment.

  4. Sheila Sondik Says:

    Thank you, Peggy!

  5. Mike Schoenburg Says:

    my own backyard
    I forget
    to love it ?

  6. papagreenbean Says:

    gingerly done!

  7. Sheila Says:

    With a touch of spice (wasabi)

  8. Michelle Schaefer Says:

    Hello Sheila! Just thought I?d comment. I love the thought if my mind as a beautiful black lacquered box where none of my thoughts can contaminate the others. Enjoyed this!


  9. Sheila Sondik Says:

    Glad the image spoke to you, Michelle!

  10. Shelly T Says:

    Clever, Sheila.

  11. Sheila Sondik Says:

    Thanks, Shelly!

  12. Leanne Mumford Says:

    Hi Sheila. There's an interesting tension here between the worries of the narrator and the usually tasty items invitingly arranged in a bento box. Or, if the bento box is empty, then the tension is between the worries and its elegant design. Either way, something to ponder on…

  13. Sheila Sondik Says:

    Thanks, Leanne. I'd pictured the box full, but that is an interesting point you raise!

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