I really like "sitting inside the fan's white noise," both for the sound generated and the potential it has to block things out. I can think of many alternative openings which might be used in tandem to create new senryu:
press release sitting inside the fan’s white noise
or
poultry farm sitting inside the fan's white noise
or
carbon pricing sitting inside the fan's white noise
It's a most malleable "image" with many great possibilities! Thanks for sharing!
June 12th, 2019 at 11:13 am
I really like "sitting inside the fan's white noise," both for the sound generated and the potential it has to block things out. I can think of many alternative openings which might be used in tandem to create new senryu:
press release sitting inside the fan’s white noise
or
poultry farm sitting inside the fan's white noise
or
carbon pricing sitting inside the fan's white noise
It's a most malleable "image" with many great possibilities! Thanks for sharing!
Autumn
June 15th, 2019 at 11:59 pm
nice