hot day sitting inside the fan’s white noise
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Sam Bateman
Since college, where he earned a degree in art and design, Sam Bateman has been a visual artist working in the medium of wood, making mostly smaller, sculptural objects. More recently, having had a longtime interest in reading poetry, he has started writing haiku and shorter poems. View all posts by Sam Bateman
I really like "sitting inside the fan's white noise," both for the sound generated and the potential it has to block things out. I can think of many alternative openings which might be used in tandem to create new senryu:
press release sitting inside the fan’s white noise
or
poultry farm sitting inside the fan's white noise
or
carbon pricing sitting inside the fan's white noise
It's a most malleable "image" with many great possibilities! Thanks for sharing!
Autumn
nice