after the scan the hospital monitor doesn’t settle
—Earl Livings
Issue 19.1 | 1 July 2019
I love the way the s-sounds frame the assonant and ominous o-sounds in your haiku.
Beautifully caught.
Achingly good
Elegant, poised and poignant.
Thanks, everyone, for your kind words about my haiku. Cheers, Earl
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July 1st, 2019 at 10:21 am
I love the way the s-sounds frame the assonant and ominous o-sounds in your haiku.
July 1st, 2019 at 10:40 am
Beautifully caught.
July 1st, 2019 at 4:41 pm
Achingly good
July 3rd, 2019 at 1:33 am
Elegant, poised and poignant.
July 3rd, 2019 at 5:56 am
Thanks, everyone, for your kind words about my haiku. Cheers, Earl