after the scan
the hospital monitor
doesn’t settle


5 Responses

  1. Gaby Bedetti Says:

    I love the way the s-sounds frame the assonant and ominous o-sounds in your haiku.

  2. Bill Kenney Says:

    Beautifully caught.

  3. Elly Varrenti Says:

    Achingly good

  4. Nadine Cresswell Says:

    Elegant, poised and poignant.

  5. Earl Livings Says:

    Thanks, everyone, for your kind words about my haiku. Cheers, Earl

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