the old elm
its darkness perfected
—Sondra J. Byrnes
Issue 19.1 | 10 July 2019
This is lovely! Such a stark and beautiful image!
well done! just beautiful! exemplifies my love of trees so perfectly! Thanks for sharing!
can the “its” be removed — to punch up both the literal and fugitive darkness !
(of course now i am haunted by “fugitive darkness”)
my old silver maple
to love it
moonless deep in the oak owl’s call
Wales Haiku Journal, Spring 2019
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