getting out of it
what I put in
didgeridoo
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Mary Stevens
Mary Stevens lives in the Hudson Valley among much wildlife. A member of HSA since 2003, her haiku have been published in several journals and blogs, The Red Moon Anthology of English-Language Haiku; the International Women's Haiku Festival: Women?s Voices; Now This: Contemporary Poems of Beginnings, Renewals, and Firsts; Write Like Issa: a haiku how-to; and The Wonder Code. She co-judged the 2013 Nicholas Virgilio Haiku Contest and presented ?The Cicada?s Voice: How Wabi Sabi Can Teach Us How to Live? at the 2015 Haiku North America in Schenectady, NY. She aspires to get out of her own way when writing haiku. View all posts by Mary Stevens
I like your poem very much…
Love the cyclic feel to this one Mary.
Mary-
It's lovely. My boss plays the didgeridoo and sometimes will play it in the hospital unit where we work. I shared your poem and he loved it. As the previous commentator said, the structure works perfectly with the subject matter.