for each grave a different verb carried, lifted, borne
(Originally published in what a [hiding] place, Cyberwit, 2019)
—Jean LeBlanc
Issue 19.2 | 30 October 2019
thanks for this, I just love it. Spoke to me in so many ways.
Stunning. I felt myself levitating as I read the last line.
Laid Down… Gravity, Staid Character of Humble Earth …
Verbs for Graves…
This is so gentle and moving. Those three words on the last line work perfectly.
Wonderful!
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October 30th, 2019 at 11:33 am
thanks for this, I just love it. Spoke to me in so many ways.
October 30th, 2019 at 1:16 pm
Stunning. I felt myself levitating as I read the last line.
October 30th, 2019 at 1:47 pm
Laid Down…
Gravity,
Staid Character of
Humble Earth …
Verbs for Graves…
October 31st, 2019 at 4:42 am
This is so gentle and moving. Those three words on the last line work perfectly.
October 31st, 2019 at 3:31 pm
Wonderful!