nightmare
unhinged all night
the banging shutter

 


5 Responses

  1. martin1223 Says:

    Thanks for your poem.

    October night
    dead leaves rush towards me

    Tinywords | 30 October 2007

  2. Kath Abela Wilson Says:

    Wonderful poem. I love the “unhinged” of it!

  3. Mojde Says:

    Beautiful…

    the attachments
    are not trustable…
    need of night.

  4. Mary Jo Says:

    Really like "unhinged."

    Perfect for today too.

  5. Robert Kingston Says:

    I agree, to me it feels as much as it says. Takes me to the chill of Nick Virgilio’s
    a sack of kittens
    sinking in
    an icy lake

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