autumn leaves more sky Published by Rich Schilling Rich Schilling is a husband, dad, and poet. He has been published in numerous journals and will continue writing until he reaches the last exit. View all posts by Rich Schilling
Nice … crooked crossing branches asymmetrical growth vigorously assimilate roots… fertile promises to giving sky autumn of life… Reply
A fun play on words! autumn leaves more sky —RICH SCHILLING Where leaves is both noun and/or verb… [the] autumn leaves = more sky And autumn leaves/makes for more sky Excellent four word multiplay verse! Alan Reply
great word play —leaves as a pivot works so well. Lots of visual here. I enjoyed your haiku very much. Reply
Love this one!
A grave scene.
What a great, line poem. Wonderful mind picture, thnaks.
Nice …
crooked crossing branches
asymmetrical growth
vigorously assimilate roots…
fertile promises to giving sky
autumn of life…
A fun play on words!
autumn leaves more sky
—RICH SCHILLING
Where leaves is both noun and/or verb…
[the] autumn leaves = more sky
And autumn leaves/makes for more sky
Excellent four word multiplay verse!
Alan
great word play —leaves as a pivot works so well. Lots of visual here.
I enjoyed your haiku very much.
Quite profound when read over and over.
Nicely done Rich.
Wow. Bravo.
Short. Sweet. Brilliant.