autumn leaves more sky
Issue 19.2 | 14 November 2019
Love this one!
A grave scene.
What a great, line poem. Wonderful mind picture, thnaks.
crooked crossing branches
vigorously assimilate roots…
fertile promises to giving sky
autumn of life…
A fun play on words!
Where leaves is both noun and/or verb…
[the] autumn leaves = more sky
And autumn leaves/makes for more sky
Excellent four word multiplay verse!
great word play —leaves as a pivot works so well. Lots of visual here.
I enjoyed your haiku very much.
Quite profound when read over and over.
Nicely done Rich.
Short. Sweet. Brilliant.
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