autumn leaves more sky
—Rich Schilling
Issue 19.2 | 14 November 2019
Love this one!
A grave scene.
What a great, line poem. Wonderful mind picture, thnaks.
Nice … crooked crossing branches asymmetrical growth vigorously assimilate roots… fertile promises to giving sky autumn of life…
A fun play on words!
—RICH SCHILLING
Where leaves is both noun and/or verb…
[the] autumn leaves = more sky
And autumn leaves/makes for more sky
Excellent four word multiplay verse!
Alan
great word play —leaves as a pivot works so well. Lots of visual here. I enjoyed your haiku very much.
Quite profound when read over and over. Nicely done Rich.
Wow. Bravo.
Short. Sweet. Brilliant.
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November 14th, 2019 at 10:32 am
Love this one!
November 14th, 2019 at 10:40 am
A grave scene.
November 14th, 2019 at 11:50 am
What a great, line poem. Wonderful mind picture, thnaks.
November 14th, 2019 at 11:53 am
Nice …
crooked crossing branches
asymmetrical growth
vigorously assimilate roots…
fertile promises to giving sky
autumn of life…
November 14th, 2019 at 2:33 pm
A fun play on words!
autumn leaves more sky
—RICH SCHILLING
Where leaves is both noun and/or verb…
[the] autumn leaves = more sky
And autumn leaves/makes for more sky
Excellent four word multiplay verse!
Alan
November 14th, 2019 at 9:12 pm
great word play —leaves as a pivot works so well. Lots of visual here.
I enjoyed your haiku very much.
November 14th, 2019 at 10:41 pm
Quite profound when read over and over.
Nicely done Rich.
November 15th, 2019 at 5:57 am
Wow. Bravo.
November 18th, 2019 at 7:48 pm
Short. Sweet. Brilliant.