autumn leaves more sky

 


9 Responses

  1. Jill Lange Says:

    Love this one!

  2. Garry Eaton Says:

    A grave scene.

  3. Mike Says:

    What a great, line poem. Wonderful mind picture, thnaks.

  4. Mojde Says:

    Nice …
    crooked crossing branches
    asymmetrical growth
    vigorously assimilate roots…
    fertile promises to giving sky
    autumn of life…

  5. Alan Summers Says:

    A fun play on words!

    autumn leaves more sky

    —RICH SCHILLING

    Where leaves is both noun and/or verb…

    [the] autumn leaves = more sky

    And autumn leaves/makes for more sky

    Excellent four word multiplay verse!

    Alan

  6. mary Jo Says:

    great word play —leaves as a pivot works so well. Lots of visual here.
    I enjoyed your haiku very much.

  7. Robert Kingston Says:

    Quite profound when read over and over.
    Nicely done Rich.

  8. jean leblanc Says:

    Wow. Bravo.

  9. Jeff Hoagland Says:

    Short. Sweet. Brilliant.

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