bubbles
scattering
children

 


3 Responses

  1. Mojde Says:

    Nice!

    The play,
    The player
    Both are fragile
    The connection
    Is strong

  2. Jim Ellis Says:

    I would place this tender, energetic, highly visual summer-themed haiku with Issa's great spring haiku:

    The snow is melting
    and the village is flooded
    with children

    Jim Ellis/Auburn, NY

  3. Alan Summers Says:

    .
    Lovely!

    It's always fun when we see youngsters captivated by something so simple!

    *

    busy traffic–
    a girl's spins in bubbles
    she's made by the road

    Alan Summers
    Spring Haiku Seasonal Blog (2006)

    A directly observed incident. I could never quite capture the unexpectedness of this event though.

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