noon
the bonsai’s shadow
barely there

 

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  1. Alan Summers Says:

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    noon
    the bonsai’s shadow
    barely there

    —BRAD BENNETT

    Noon (mid-day light) is a funny thing, perhaps because we define ourselves, other people, nature and buildings, by the shadows they cast.

    Light which casts these shadows has a dynamic even with something as small (and imprisoned perhaps) as a bonsai tree, within its iron straps. Are we chained too?

    the shadow
    the shadow overtakes
    is all his in this late hour

    Alan Summers
    Blithe Spirit Vol. 5 No. 2 (1995)

  2. magyar Says:

    Nice inner vision, Brad!
    __ Human hands have set the Bonsai; the Bonsai then, sets human eyes.

    life times turn
    as this suns shadow changes
    this bonsai smiles

  3. haikuapprentice Says:

    Wow Brad,
    The simplicity and spirituality in this haiku took my breath away!
    Bravo! Thank you for sharing it.

    Strider

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