rent arrears
my son’s goldfish swims
around its castle

 


4 Responses

  1. Mark Dailey Says:

    I love this — a wonderful haiku! Awesome juxtaposition, great image!

    stack of bills / a blinking plane crosses / the Milky Way

  2. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Brilliant!

  3. Seren Fargo Says:

    I agree! Brilliant and wonderful are perfect descriptions for this haiku. So unique as well. After reading this, that goldfish continued to circle in my head. Love it.

  4. martin1223 Says:

    hide and seek
    the long trail of gold fish crackers

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