rent arrears my son’s goldfish swims around its castle
—John McManus
Issue 19.2 | 23 January 2020
I love this — a wonderful haiku! Awesome juxtaposition, great image!
stack of bills / a blinking plane crosses / the Milky Way
Brilliant!
I agree! Brilliant and wonderful are perfect descriptions for this haiku. So unique as well. After reading this, that goldfish continued to circle in my head. Love it.
hide and seek the long trail of gold fish crackers
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January 23rd, 2020 at 9:34 am
I love this — a wonderful haiku! Awesome juxtaposition, great image!
stack of bills / a blinking plane crosses / the Milky Way
January 23rd, 2020 at 2:53 pm
Brilliant!
January 24th, 2020 at 6:06 pm
I agree! Brilliant and wonderful are perfect descriptions for this haiku. So unique as well. After reading this, that goldfish continued to circle in my head. Love it.
February 1st, 2020 at 1:08 pm
hide and seek
the long trail of gold fish crackers