hothouse roses without a scent those words of comfort you almost offered
—Joan Prefontaine
Issue 19.2 | 13 February 2020
Brilliant juxtaposition, Joan! Love this tanka.
Joan, love the metaphor and the emotional impact. Thanks.
Wow! Great Like Dylan's Positively 4th Street.
Right on target! I'll remember this one for long time!
Excellent. Smiling. Think I've been there. Best, Jim
Beautiful!
The wind of autumn Sings … And the leaves , Fall …
Great tension in this one.
marion
disappearing ripples on the Eucalyptus forest laughing Kookaburra
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February 13th, 2020 at 9:15 am
Brilliant juxtaposition, Joan! Love this tanka.
February 13th, 2020 at 9:50 am
Joan, love the metaphor and the emotional impact. Thanks.
February 13th, 2020 at 11:33 am
Wow! Great Like Dylan's Positively 4th Street.
February 13th, 2020 at 4:06 pm
Right on target! I'll remember this one for long time!
February 13th, 2020 at 4:55 pm
Excellent.
Smiling. Think I've been there.
Best, Jim
February 14th, 2020 at 9:59 am
Beautiful!
The wind of autumn
Sings …
And the leaves ,
Fall …
February 16th, 2020 at 9:13 am
Great tension in this one.
marion
February 19th, 2020 at 11:36 pm
disappearing ripples
on the Eucalyptus forest
laughing Kookaburra