spring breeze the happy wave of long johns
—Marietta McGregor
Issue 19.2 | 18 February 2020
Excellent, love this!
So much communicated in so few words; and, thanks for this happiness.
this is such a joyful haiku. Very original.
I agree with previous comments. This is just delightful.
Yes, the smile this poem elicited was very welcome today!
swollen February the field full of sky
https://twitter.com/baigesasazhang/status/1227758…
good-bye to winter
Lifted my spirits this morning, thank you.
I love the mood and visual image of this haiku (also nice the way we see the string of long johns on a clothesline without the clothesline even being mentioned)
Smiling and laughing. Very nicely done Marietta
Wonderful (especially seeing the lines way up in the sky on my new 27-inch monitor)
Such an uplifting (unintended pun!) haiku, Marietta! :)
marion
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February 18th, 2020 at 9:07 am
Excellent, love this!
February 18th, 2020 at 10:26 am
So much communicated in so few words; and, thanks for this happiness.
February 18th, 2020 at 5:58 pm
this is such a joyful haiku. Very original.
February 18th, 2020 at 6:28 pm
I agree with previous comments.
This is just delightful.
February 18th, 2020 at 7:11 pm
Yes, the smile this poem elicited was very welcome today!
February 19th, 2020 at 8:44 pm
swollen February
the field full of sky
https://twitter.com/baigesasazhang/status/1227758…
February 20th, 2020 at 7:23 am
good-bye to winter
February 21st, 2020 at 1:40 pm
Lifted my spirits this morning, thank you.
February 22nd, 2020 at 6:23 pm
I love the mood and visual image of this haiku (also nice the way we see the string of long johns on a clothesline without the clothesline even being mentioned)
February 24th, 2020 at 2:39 pm
Smiling and laughing. Very nicely done Marietta
February 25th, 2020 at 9:38 pm
Wonderful (especially seeing the lines way up in the sky on my new 27-inch monitor)
February 27th, 2020 at 4:15 am
Such an uplifting (unintended pun!) haiku, Marietta! :)
marion