spring breeze
the happy wave
of long johns

12 Responses

  1. Peggy French Says:

    Excellent, love this!

  2. Janice Campbell Says:

    So much communicated in so few words; and, thanks for this happiness.

  3. Jo Balistreri Says:

    this is such a joyful haiku. Very original.

  4. Seren Fargo Says:

    I agree with previous comments.
    This is just delightful.

  5. Sheila Sondik Says:

    Yes, the smile this poem elicited was very welcome today!

  6. martin1223 Says:

    swollen February
    the field full of sky


  7. Peter Newton Says:

    good-bye to winter

  8. janewilliams Says:

    Lifted my spirits this morning, thank you.

  9. Jacquie Pearce Says:

    I love the mood and visual image of this haiku (also nice the way we see the string of long johns on a clothesline without the clothesline even being mentioned)

  10. Robert Kingston Says:

    Smiling and laughing. Very nicely done Marietta

  11. Geoff Pope Says:

    Wonderful (especially seeing the lines way up in the sky on my new 27-inch monitor)

  12. seaviewwarrenpoint Says:

    Such an uplifting (unintended pun!) haiku, Marietta! :)


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