muting
the commercial
mourning dove

 

3 Responses

  1. Marilyn Hazelton Says:

    Lovely!

  2. martin1223 Says:

    muting
    the commercial
    mourning dove

    —TOM BIEROVIC

    Thank you, I enjoyed your poem and especially the muting of the commercial with the softness of the morning dove’s call.

    spring’s end
    at the wake
    laughing gulls

  3. parishaiku Says:

    How many other wonderful sounds in our lives are we missing because of our TV habits … and especially during those loud commercials? Let's use that mute button more frequently! Lovely haiku.

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