winter rain
watering the flowers
on her umbrella

 

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Philip Whitley

Philip Whitley was born in North Carolina and grew up in a small southeastern town with a population the same as it was when he lived there. He is a sculptor who came to haiku late in life and expects he will continue exploring the haiku form, well, forever.

6 thoughts on “”

  1. Nice! I like the surprise turn at the end.

    Here?s one of mine:

    cold snap
    the howling wolf
    in the asthmatic?s lungs

    (Presence #50, 2014)

  2. Fun verse!!!

    Of course the most famous umbrella haiku has to be by Richard Wright:

    Just enough of rain
    To bring the smell of silk
    From umbrellas

    Richard Wright

    ***

    Easter Wedding
    the chauffeur in a tangle
    with the umbrella

    Alan Summers
    Publication credits: Presence #44 (2011)

    .

    cabbage butterflies–
    a man with an umbrella
    when there’s no rain

    Alan Summers
    ‘hokku’ section
    Under the Basho journal vol 1.1 Autumn 2013

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