tall bamboo
bows to the pruners
late snow

3 Responses

  1. Jan Dobb Says:

    Yes, I love the way this one unfolds, Sheila. That gentle twist in the last line makes you think again! It's a haiku to stay with . . .

  2. Sheila Sondik Says:

    Thank you, Jan! Glad you're enjoying it. This haiku is more in tune with your hemisphere's current season, but it fits with my season of the life cycle, too.

  3. martin1223 Says:

    coal dust
    in the rotting pier
    heat wave

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