lopsided moon
I consider both sides
of the argument
—SUSAN CONSTABLE
Fun feeling of two people out a little too late, or too early if it's 3am or later after a club. I guess the two parties might be wonderfully friendly and sentimental, rather than argumentative. Gosh, have I heard so many late night/early morning arguments outside various places I've lived! :-)
lopsided moon
I consider both sides
of the argument
Susan, great poem! I love how fresh "lopsided moon" is for the fragment. Arguments can be such a delicate balancing act, and you've captured that quite well here.
July 2nd, 2020 at 9:18 am
What a perfect haiku for contemplating today.
Thanks, Susan.
July 5th, 2020 at 8:52 pm
Ah …. this is where my response SHOULD have appeared … not down below. Thank you so much for reading and commenting, MaryJo!
July 2nd, 2020 at 9:31 am
Very nice, Susan.
July 2nd, 2020 at 3:25 pm
Thank you, David!
July 2nd, 2020 at 9:52 am
Beautifully done, Susan. Love how you intertwine nature with human nature.
July 2nd, 2020 at 3:23 pm
I appreciate your response, Dru. Thank you!
July 2nd, 2020 at 10:21 am
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lopsided moon
I consider both sides
of the argument
—SUSAN CONSTABLE
Fun feeling of two people out a little too late, or too early if it's 3am or later after a club. I guess the two parties might be wonderfully friendly and sentimental, rather than argumentative. Gosh, have I heard so many late night/early morning arguments outside various places I've lived! :-)
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Blue Moon we don't do one-sided conversations
Alan Summers
Prune Juice issue 9 (July 2012)
July 2nd, 2020 at 3:25 pm
Thanks for sharing your reading, Alan. Glad this works for you!
July 2nd, 2020 at 1:44 pm
Very good. No argument.
waxing gibbous
she says we need
to talk
July 2nd, 2020 at 3:22 pm
Love the comment, Bill. Thanks!
July 2nd, 2020 at 3:26 pm
Somehow I managed to lose my response to you, MaryJo. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
July 2nd, 2020 at 4:28 pm
I like your fragment 'lopsided moon'. Don't think I've seen that used before. Works so well with your phrase. Very nice!
July 5th, 2020 at 8:53 pm
Thanks for popping by, Dan. I'm glad you find 'lopsided moon' effective.
July 2nd, 2020 at 4:29 pm
Absolutely lovely, Susan.
Love the way you've taken the ku forward from L 1!
July 5th, 2020 at 8:54 pm
Many thanks, Kala. I appreciate your taking the time to comment.
July 3rd, 2020 at 1:14 am
lopsided moon
I consider both sides
of the argument
Susan, great poem! I love how fresh "lopsided moon" is for the fragment. Arguments can be such a delicate balancing act, and you've captured that quite well here.
July 5th, 2020 at 8:50 pm
Thanks so much, Cyndi. It's so difficult to remain objective!
July 3rd, 2020 at 10:14 pm
Enjoyed your poem!
humpback moon
into the krill's silence
distant song
July 5th, 2020 at 8:51 pm
Many thanks, Martin!