Amish country
the precision
of a cracked whip

5 Responses

  1. MaryJo Says:

    I can hear the whip Bryon. Great visual.

  2. Meik Blöttenberger Says:

    Living in Amish Country, I believe this haiku really speaks the truth. So well-crafted and I can hear and feel it!

  3. martin1223 Says:

    passing cloud
    between the doe’s ears
    twitching gnat

  4. David Gross Says:

    Bryan, being a neighbor of yours (about 45 miles south) and residing on a small farm in the middle of Mennonite country the crack of that whip hits close to home. Thanks for the fine haiku which encouraged me to order your new collection.

  5. jublke Says:

    Excellent poem, Bryan.

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