retirement benefits I pick up sand dollars
—S. M. Kozubek
Issue 20.1 | 16 July 2020
I wish. Since I've retired I don't have time to go to the beach. Great poem.
Very good!
Nice!
I like this one. It has a simple yet clear message. It is funny and profound. The best combination. Well done!
I like your poem and find it funny but yet wise–being in touch like that with nature.
Grand! Love everything about it.
S.M., I felt my imagination grow from your nifty verse, my thanks! __ Now: Did I imagine "tour" trips, or "flip-flop" trips? _m
trips on sandy shores from this retirement check in sloppy flip-flops
Nice also, Magyar!
Thank you! This one speaks to me.
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July 16th, 2020 at 9:29 am
I wish. Since I've retired I don't have time to go to the beach. Great poem.
July 16th, 2020 at 10:21 am
Very good!
July 16th, 2020 at 10:57 am
Nice!
July 16th, 2020 at 11:30 am
I like this one. It has a simple yet clear message. It is funny and profound. The best combination. Well done!
July 16th, 2020 at 12:36 pm
I like your poem and find it funny but yet wise–being in touch like that with nature.
July 16th, 2020 at 7:58 pm
Grand! Love everything about it.
July 17th, 2020 at 7:10 am
S.M., I felt my imagination grow from your nifty verse, my thanks!
__ Now: Did I imagine "tour" trips, or "flip-flop" trips? _m
trips on sandy shores
from this retirement check
in sloppy flip-flops
August 20th, 2020 at 7:05 pm
Nice also, Magyar!
July 20th, 2020 at 8:00 am
Thank you! This one speaks to me.