retirement benefits
I pick up
sand dollars

8 Responses

  1. David Gross Says:

    I wish. Since I've retired I don't have time to go to the beach. Great poem.

  2. Garry Says:

    Very good!

  3. Jeffrey Winke Says:

    Nice!

  4. papagreenbean Says:

    I like this one. It has a simple yet clear message. It is funny and profound. The best combination. Well done!

  5. MaryJo Says:

    I like your poem and find it funny but yet wise–being in touch like that with nature.

  6. Janice Campbell Says:

    Grand! Love everything about it.

  7. Magyar Says:

    S.M., I felt my imagination grow from your nifty verse, my thanks!
    __ Now: Did I imagine "tour" trips, or "flip-flop" trips? _m

    trips on sandy shores
    from this retirement check
    in sloppy flip-flops

  8. Jill Lange Says:

    Thank you! This one speaks to me.

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