beach umbrella
all day the orbit
of its shadow

(haiga)

beach umbrella
all day the orbit
of its shadow

(haiku published in The Heron’s Nest, XXI.3, Sept. 2019)

3 Responses

  1. Nancy Rapp Says:

    I love the "orbit of its shadow" well put! And the illustration is fantastic!

  2. Magyar Says:

    Grand thought Annette_!
    __ Shadows 'encircle' each day… yet, we step beyond those barriers. Smiles, _m.

    lifes incoming waves
    wash away all dark shadows
    a seagull watches

  3. Annette Makino Says:

    Thank you all for the comments and poetic responses!

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