in the space
left by twilight
crickets

9 Responses

  1. Lynne Rees Says:

    This is beautifully succint and sensory. Lovely.

  2. Guy Stephenson Says:

    That is perfect.

  3. Andrea Says:

    Brief and so nice…

  4. David Gross Says:

    Nice.

  5. Peggy Hale Bilbro Says:

    Lovely!

  6. martin1223 Says:

    Ann, it's just wonderful!

    lake crossing
    dusk lingers in the ice

    Tinywords │21 February 2008

  7. Nancy Rapp Says:

    haiku envy :)

  8. Alexa Selph Says:

    Lovely blend of light and sound!

  9. Marie Louise Munro Says:

    Wonderful!

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