higher tides crabs scuttling on asphalt
—Lorraine A Padden
Issue 20.2 | 7 December 2020
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—LORRAINE A. PADDEN
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Love the contrast of tides to asphalt, and the texture switch!
Despite living in Australia, and Queensland, and having been on Diamond Head, Hawaii, I'm surprised I have no crab haiku! But a few asphalt ones! :-)
drifting clouds along an asphalt of ice cream summer roads of longing
one line haiku by Alan Summers part of "Pandemica’s Clouds" sequence
Anthology: behind the mask: haiku in the time of Covid-19 Singing Moon Press Pandemic Anthology ed. Margaret Dornaus (2020)
Nice soundings Lorraine!
Good navigating to true north, Alan!
scuttlebutt in the night-fog rolling in
leapin lizards!
fox den the scuttling of mice
I love all of these variations!! Scuttling and asphalt are particularly evocative words, no?
Martin :-)
long hard rain my compass your true north
Alan Summers Publication credits: Frogpond 36.1 • 2013 and VerSuch … das projekt gendai haiku (1st July 2013)
starker Dauerregen mein Kompass dein geographischer Norden trans. Ralf Bröker
VerSuch … das projekt gendai haikuBers
German by Ralph Broker
German and gendai!
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December 7th, 2020 at 10:52 am
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higher tides
crabs scuttling
on asphalt
—LORRAINE A. PADDEN
*
Love the contrast of tides to asphalt, and the texture switch!
Despite living in Australia, and Queensland, and having been on Diamond Head, Hawaii, I'm surprised I have no crab haiku! But a few asphalt ones! :-)
.
drifting clouds along an asphalt of ice cream summer roads of longing
one line haiku by Alan Summers
part of "Pandemica’s Clouds" sequence
Anthology:
behind the mask: haiku in the time of Covid-19
Singing Moon Press Pandemic Anthology ed. Margaret Dornaus (2020)
December 9th, 2020 at 9:44 am
Nice soundings Lorraine!
Good navigating to true north, Alan!
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scuttlebutt in the night-fog rolling in
December 9th, 2020 at 10:46 am
leapin lizards!
fox den
the scuttling of mice
December 10th, 2020 at 11:36 am
I love all of these variations!! Scuttling and asphalt are particularly evocative words, no?
December 10th, 2020 at 1:21 pm
Martin :-)
long hard rain my compass your true north
Alan Summers
Publication credits:
Frogpond 36.1 • 2013
and
VerSuch … das projekt gendai haiku (1st July 2013)
starker Dauerregen mein Kompass dein geographischer Norden
trans. Ralf Bröker
VerSuch … das projekt gendai haikuBers
German by Ralph Broker
German and gendai!