the white flutter
of prayer flags
Issue 20.2 | 23 December 2020
Nice haiku Jo, understated and powerful too. I like the placement of "white," suggesting surrender and then the last line brings it home
on a wonderful haiku, so deserving of recognition.
Ah, Michael. Thank you for your comment.
Very lovely, Jo — apt for the moment and full of hope and acceptance
Thank you Bruce. appreciate you writing.
Thank you Bob. Your reading of the haiku is very pleasing.
The three lines build up to an image of a person clinging to hope in these strange and turbulent times. Very effective, Jo.
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