sheltering the white flutter of prayer flags
—Jo Balistreri
Issue 20.2 | 23 December 2020
Nice haiku Jo, understated and powerful too. I like the placement of "white," suggesting surrender and then the last line brings it home
Congratulations, Jo, on a wonderful haiku, so deserving of recognition. Michael Escoubas
Ah, Michael. Thank you for your comment.
Very lovely, Jo — apt for the moment and full of hope and acceptance
Thank you Bruce. appreciate you writing.
Thank you Bob. Your reading of the haiku is very pleasing.
The three lines build up to an image of a person clinging to hope in these strange and turbulent times. Very effective, Jo.
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December 23rd, 2020 at 4:38 pm
Nice haiku Jo, understated and powerful too. I like the placement of "white," suggesting surrender and then the last line brings it home
December 23rd, 2020 at 4:42 pm
Congratulations, Jo,
on a wonderful haiku, so deserving of recognition.
Michael Escoubas
December 23rd, 2020 at 8:54 pm
Ah, Michael. Thank you for your comment.
December 23rd, 2020 at 5:18 pm
Very lovely, Jo — apt for the moment and full of hope and acceptance
December 23rd, 2020 at 8:53 pm
Thank you Bruce. appreciate you writing.
December 23rd, 2020 at 8:55 pm
Thank you Bob. Your reading of the haiku is very pleasing.
January 8th, 2021 at 1:26 am
The three lines build up to an image of a person clinging to hope in these strange and turbulent times. Very effective, Jo.
marion