Thought provoking, Elmedin. When I read the word ?chimes? I heard the sound, but by the time I read the third line I thought perhaps the chimes were still and the wind was ?in place? ready to move them…but then wondered how this could be, because if the wind were in place they?d already be moving! A trixy one. I love it! ?
December 29th, 2020 at 10:06 am
Beautiful: nothing else to say…
December 29th, 2020 at 10:33 pm
Such kind words. Thank you, Andrea!
December 30th, 2020 at 10:18 pm
Thanks!
January 8th, 2021 at 1:15 am
Thought provoking, Elmedin. When I read the word ?chimes? I heard the sound, but by the time I read the third line I thought perhaps the chimes were still and the wind was ?in place? ready to move them…but then wondered how this could be, because if the wind were in place they?d already be moving! A trixy one. I love it! ?
marion
January 9th, 2021 at 3:59 am
I can see this – excellent poem