chimes
the wind
in place

5 Responses

  1. Andrea Says:

    Beautiful: nothing else to say…

  2. Elmedin Kadric Says:

    Such kind words. Thank you, Andrea!

  3. Elmedin Kadric Says:

    Thanks!

  4. Marion Clarke Says:

    Thought provoking, Elmedin. When I read the word “chimes” I heard the sound, but by the time I read the third line I thought perhaps the chimes were still and the wind was “in place” ready to move them…but then wondered how this could be, because if the wind were in place they’d already be moving! A trixy one. I love it! 😄

    marion

  5. Ellen Grace Olinger Says:

    I can see this – excellent poem

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