empty
a crow leaves
the robin’s nest

2 Responses

  1. Dan Curtis Says:

    I like this, Frank. It can be read at least two different ways and so adds to the depth and enjoyment of the ku. Nicely done.

  2. edbremson Says:

    one of the best poems I've ever read. I wrote the same thing once, and used two or three times the words. As Dan said, yours can be read in different ways. Congratulations on a fine poem.

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