nestled into oak the urge of white trilliums
—Jo Balistreri
Issue 21.1 | 22 April 2021
Very nice, Jo!
what a beautiful one line haiku!
—JO BALISTRERI
That single word 'urge' which feels like it wants to be a noun and a verb at the same time, really drives this haiku!
warm regards, Alan
Lovely haiku, Jo. Yes, the urge of all living things to spring forth is something we can all relate to!
Thank you for your comments Mary, Alan, and Julie.
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April 22nd, 2021 at 9:10 am
Very nice, Jo!
April 22nd, 2021 at 9:13 am
what a beautiful one line haiku!
nestled into oak the urge of white trilliums
—JO BALISTRERI
That single word 'urge' which feels like it wants to be a noun and a verb at the same time, really drives this haiku!
warm regards,
Alan
April 22nd, 2021 at 9:23 am
Lovely haiku, Jo. Yes, the urge of all living things to spring forth is something we can all relate to!
April 22nd, 2021 at 9:59 am
Thank you for your comments Mary, Alan, and Julie.