sun among the branches … in the smile of an old man a gold tooth
—Lucia Cardillo
Issue 21.1 | 13 May 2021
Nifty ! __Lucia, the "old ruin-" is one of your fine haiku entry lines. Each year must become a full smile… as we step above that year's collective, and older ruin. Smiles! :<) _m
"old ruin" seventy nine smiles counts my years
a sunshine smile indeed
much love…
I love this so much
Breathtakingly beautiful!
marion
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May 13th, 2021 at 10:16 am
Nifty !
__Lucia, the "old ruin-" is one of your fine haiku entry lines. Each year must become a full smile… as we step above that year's collective, and older ruin. Smiles! :<) _m
"old ruin"
seventy nine smiles
counts my years
May 14th, 2021 at 11:16 am
a sunshine smile indeed
much love…
May 19th, 2021 at 9:37 am
I love this so much
June 8th, 2021 at 2:27 am
Breathtakingly beautiful!
marion