barely dawn
a spider weaves yesterday
into today

20 Responses

  1. Janet Butler Says:

    Very nice haiku. Says a lot with little!

  2. Sanjuktaa Asopa Says:

    Thank you so much, Janet Butler!

  3. Mary Stevens Says:

    Very nice!

  4. Sanjuktaa Asopa Says:

    Mary Stevens, thank you!

  5. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    Wonderful, emeshes the tiny physical with the vastness of time.

  6. Sanjuktaa Asopa Says:

    Dirk van Nouhuys, thanks a lot!

  7. MaryJo Says:

    Wonderful haiku–the spider stretches time, is time.

  8. Sanjuktaa Asopa Says:

    Thanks a lot, MaryJo!

  9. Vidya Venkatramani Says:

    A delicately woven haiku !! So well done !!

  10. Sanjuktaa Asopa Says:

    thanks so much, Vidya!

  11. Alexa Selph Says:

    Lovely! Image and metaphor woven into one!

  12. Sanjuktaa Asopa Says:

    Alexa, thanks a bunch!

  13. Nancy Rapp Says:

    This is beautiful! So well crafted.

  14. Sanjuktaa Asopa Says:

    Glad you liked, Nancy! Many thanks!

  15. Kala Ramesh Says:

    Absolutely refreshing haiku, Sanjuktaa

  16. Sanjuktaa Asopa Says:

    Thanks a million, Kala!

  17. Dawn Apanius Says:

    Wow. Saving into my favorites file ?

  18. Sanjuktaa Asopa Says:

    A million thanks, Dawn!

  19. Marion Clarke Says:

    A wonderful observation, Sanjuktaa.


  20. martin1223 Says:

    How did I miss this? I guess, I went through a gravity wave. Well done!

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