years balancing
on the edge
of words

4 Responses

  1. Marilyn Hazelton Says:

    Oh, yes!

  2. Gaby Bedetti Says:

    There's a vast scope of time in your haiku: I love the way it becomes complex in dimension.
    words balancing
    on the edge
    of silence

  3. ingridbaluchi Says:

    I agree, Gaby. There are several interpretations here.
    Mine may take Jim's poem out of context as it seemed to me that the pandemic over the last couple of years has, through isolation and unfamiliar polarization, either cemented or broken relationships. For some, I hope they have experienced this togetherness:

    the easy silence
    between us

  4. R K Singh Says:

    post-sexless night’s

    21/21 —

    winter solstice

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