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8 Responses

1. Julie Schwerin Says:
   March 30th, 2022 at 1:47 pm

   A beautiful transition to spring poem, Jo! I love the pairing of the warm breath and the frost flowers.
   "frost flowers" is a delicious fragment!

2. Mary Jo Says:
   March 30th, 2022 at 2:07 pm

   Thank you Julie.
   Your comment is much appreciated.

3. Alan Summers Says:
   March 30th, 2022 at 1:55 pm

   Wonderful haiku!!! Great use of senses.

   Alan

4. Mary Jo Says:
   March 30th, 2022 at 2:09 pm

   Thanks so much, Alan.

5. Sheila Sondik Says:
   March 30th, 2022 at 2:28 pm

   Tender! I love it.

6. Mary Jo Says:
   March 30th, 2022 at 5:40 pm

   Thank you Sheila. How kind of you to write.

7. Magyar Says:
   March 31st, 2022 at 12:05 pm

   __ Two days harmony: seasons change.

   frost flowers re-lit
   yesterday's snowdrop buds
   this boy's warm smile

8. Greer Woodward Says:
   March 31st, 2022 at 8:01 pm

   Dear Jo,

   What a lovely haiku. Way to go! I
   especially enjoyed the beauty of “frost flowers.”

   Aloha,
   Greer

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