disappearing into a boy’s warm breath frost flowers
—Jo Balistreri
Issue 22.1 | 30 March 2022
A beautiful transition to spring poem, Jo! I love the pairing of the warm breath and the frost flowers. "frost flowers" is a delicious fragment!
Thank you Julie. Your comment is much appreciated.
Wonderful haiku!!! Great use of senses.
Alan
Thanks so much, Alan.
Tender! I love it.
Thank you Sheila. How kind of you to write.
__ Two days harmony: seasons change.
frost flowers re-lit yesterday's snowdrop buds this boy's warm smile
Dear Jo,
What a lovely haiku. Way to go! I especially enjoyed the beauty of “frost flowers.”
Aloha, Greer
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March 30th, 2022 at 1:47 pm
A beautiful transition to spring poem, Jo! I love the pairing of the warm breath and the frost flowers.
"frost flowers" is a delicious fragment!
March 30th, 2022 at 2:07 pm
Thank you Julie.
Your comment is much appreciated.
March 30th, 2022 at 1:55 pm
Wonderful haiku!!! Great use of senses.
Alan
March 30th, 2022 at 2:09 pm
Thanks so much, Alan.
March 30th, 2022 at 2:28 pm
Tender! I love it.
March 30th, 2022 at 5:40 pm
Thank you Sheila. How kind of you to write.
March 31st, 2022 at 12:05 pm
__ Two days harmony: seasons change.
frost flowers re-lit
yesterday's snowdrop buds
this boy's warm smile
March 31st, 2022 at 8:01 pm
Dear Jo,
What a lovely haiku. Way to go! I
especially enjoyed the beauty of “frost flowers.”
Aloha,
Greer