into a boy’s warm breath
frost flowers


8 Responses

  1. Julie Schwerin Says:

    A beautiful transition to spring poem, Jo! I love the pairing of the warm breath and the frost flowers.
    "frost flowers" is a delicious fragment!

  2. Mary Jo Says:

    Thank you Julie.
    Your comment is much appreciated.

  3. Alan Summers Says:

    Wonderful haiku!!! Great use of senses.


  4. Mary Jo Says:

    Thanks so much, Alan.

  5. Sheila Sondik Says:

    Tender! I love it.

  6. Mary Jo Says:

    Thank you Sheila. How kind of you to write.

  7. Magyar Says:

    __ Two days harmony: seasons change.

    frost flowers re-lit
    yesterday's snowdrop buds
    this boy's warm smile

  8. Greer Woodward Says:

    Dear Jo,

    What a lovely haiku. Way to go! I
    especially enjoyed the beauty of “frost flowers.”


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