OMG! Loved this one! Star gazing always brings about longing and awe and a feeling of eternal time that's so fleeting for us Earthlings—and this poem brought all those feelings together for me. Well done. Another poem I wish I'd written! ;)
Thank you to everyone for commenting and interacting. I trul appreciate your words. Sorry it took so long to reply but I didn’t realise there was a comment form!!! Doh!
April 1st, 2022 at 12:20 pm
I love the swirl of time evoked in this one! Many thanks!
April 1st, 2022 at 12:52 pm
__ Stars taunt… in liight-speed… their time.
April 1st, 2022 at 12:53 pm
OMG! Loved this one! Star gazing always brings about longing and awe and a feeling of eternal time that's so fleeting for us Earthlings—and this poem brought all those feelings together for me. Well done. Another poem I wish I'd written! ;)
April 1st, 2022 at 5:45 pm
I love this!
April 2nd, 2022 at 1:55 am
I love this, John. As well as being breathtakingly beautiful, it invites the reader to ponder time and space and our place in it.
marion
April 2nd, 2022 at 7:18 am
I love this poem!
April 12th, 2022 at 10:09 am
A beautiful poem that has me feeling a day late and a dollar short! I love the gentle humor. Well done!
April 19th, 2022 at 12:50 am
no time… the light between a blue jay's song
April 23rd, 2024 at 1:47 am
Thank you to everyone for commenting and interacting. I trul appreciate your words. Sorry it took so long to reply but I didn’t realise there was a comment form!!! Doh!