line of daybreak
an evergreen sways
to stillness


2 Responses

  1. Dan Curtis Says:

    Frank, a good one! I love your phrase. It's original and very visual. It "stopped me in my tracks" so to speak.

  2. Mark Teaford Says:

    I totally agree with Dan's comment. For me, the combination of words conveys peacefulness, with just a hint of calming movement…. very relaxing.

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