big sky a snag on the river leaving no scar Published by Jeffrey Ferrara Jeffrey Ferrara is an haiku apprentice living in Worcester, Massachusetts. View all posts by Jeffrey Ferrara
Love the expansiveness of the first line and using the "narrowing down" technique to a final 'leaving no scar'. Sublime. warm regards, Alan Reply
Fantastic poem, Jeffrey! And Thank you for sharing your review on this haiku, Alan. It enriches my perspective. Reply
Thanks Elisa, The narrowing down or zoom effect (which Jane Reichhold talked about) can be brilliantly effective as in Jeffrey Ferrara's haiku. warm regards, Alan editor, The Haiku Reader anthology Reply
silent rivers dam fallen rush turns loud and vast sense-filled images __As we see and hear… we imagine. Reply
Love the expansiveness of the first line and using the "narrowing down" technique to a final 'leaving no scar'. Sublime.
warm regards,
Alan
Fantastic poem, Jeffrey!
And Thank you for sharing your review on this haiku, Alan. It enriches my perspective.
Thanks Elisa,
The narrowing down or zoom effect (which Jane Reichhold talked about) can be brilliantly effective as in Jeffrey Ferrara's haiku.
warm regards,
Alan
editor, The Haiku Reader anthology
silent rivers dam
fallen rush turns loud and vast
sense-filled images
__As we see and hear… we imagine.